good, ur right about the piano :p
You're right about the piano, I didn't take any points off for that though because you mentioned that and have an excuse ;) One thing peeves me off is crappy piano instruments, but I've found that the Soundfont player coupled with a good soundfont (I prefer FLuid R3) has a pretty decent sounding piano. Just a little tidbit if ur thinking of composing at 3 AM again lol. The voice was really cool. Its hard to tell what you're saying, but it gives the song a really eerie feel to it. I always wonder how people can make stuff this good in only a couple of hours.
Good job, but only a 9/10 because it just seemed like it was nothing too special.