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[hopeless wondering]

Find some harmonies

A lot of your instruments clash at points. you have to realize how harmonies work and how you use them too make a song. Listen to some other songs and download some midi files to see how the note progression works. That will help you a lot and makeur music much better.

peace out and hope it gets better :P

DjWoIfie responds:

thanks a lot xD yeah i know, i kinda rushed the song after the first 15 sec because i wanted to be done its just my first version ^^

[Little Bells Demo]

Get some harmony

You have got to learn how to use proper harmony before you can make any kind of music. Wiki "harmony" as well as read up on some music theory. Then you will be able to grasp the fundamentals of music, and start some real composing.

Just do some research and you will be infinite times better.

[La Valse d'Amelie <[[cover]]>]

Good performance

As a piano player I can appreciate the difficulty of playing this. I love how easy it is to just put notes into piano roll and hear a sweet song in perfect time, but nothing really compares to a real person pulling the strings. You are an excellent piano player, keep it up.

mjattie responds:

:) thanks man!

[Power Of Leads [Trancecore]]

Excellent

Everything sounds pretty good. You did a really good job mastering, and everything else sounds good. I am just not a fan of some parts, so that what the 8 is for. But 5/5, great song, I likes :)

[Piano Echoes - Mjattie]

Excellent ambient

Absolutely love this. Great job. I would say the intro is too long adn the rest is too short, so cut some off the intro and add some more to the middle and end in my opinion. Great job though, keep up the work.

[Do You Still Hate Me?]

Vocals need a boost

Sounded pretty good to me. Your vocals need to be a little louder and the guitars and bass need to be softer. other than minor balancing, sounds great. Nice stuff.

[Piano Solo <1> - Mjattie]

One thing...

Good improvising skills and composing too. Just get a better piano synth. The one you are using doesn't sound too great on its own, unrealistic. Test out some soundfonts.

Keep it up. You'll notice stuff w/ a keyboard is like 10x easier to make.

mjattie responds:

some things are, but some things aren't xD

thanks for reaction

[Atomic Tension - Mjattie]

A little thin

You need a little more effects in it. Also, your drums dont seem to be working well (said that in another song too) especially the kick. Theres too much drop in it (don't know the actual term for it, but it seems like you can hear the pitch drop too much).

In the end though, you pulled it off decently.

[Happier Times - Mjattie]

Not my favourite either

Whoever said it below is right. This is definitely not one of my favourite songs of yours. It's way too repetitive, and the drums aren't quite up to the part. In my opinion, it also lacks a little bit of the drive that gives some dance songs their flare, its a little unexciting. Also, theres something odd about how you did the chords and melody that just doesn't sound right. Its just a bad combination. Sorry for the not very nice review, but I gotta be honest.