One thing...
Good improvising skills and composing too. Just get a better piano synth. The one you are using doesn't sound too great on its own, unrealistic. Test out some soundfonts.
Keep it up. You'll notice stuff w/ a keyboard is like 10x easier to make.
Neat sounds
Pretty unique and interesting sounding. You have some really neat effects going on there. Its not quite my thing, but w.e, its still good, and you deserve a 5 for it.
Good job, keep up the good work
thanks :)
Neat, good composing
Good little diddy. I have no idea how well it will fit into another song. Thats some pretty good composing though, keep working on it. The one thing I am not so sure about is the little semitone drops (forget the technical name... turns? maybe?)
anyways, good job.
Hey thanks for the review! I will be incorporating this rythym and a little more on the final track, which I... still have yet to figure out how to fit it like you said lol, but it will be done. I was wondering about those changes, I may change those according to the ending, not sure though.
Thanks again! Will be checking out your music as well, peace!
I agree
bass and kick are definitely way too loud in some parts at least. One other thing I noticed around ... 0:55 or so. I'm not a real fan of the pulsing, what is it, static? I realize that its probably just one of your synths, but the point is that it just sounds weird. Other than that, good job, keep up the good work.
hmmmm... I haven't heard the kick is too loud...yet... But I don't know what you mean with the pulsing synth, you call static O.o.... I listent to 0:40-0:60 but don't know what you mean... I just don't know what all you guys are saying that the bass is too loud... Can some1 explain why? When I listen to Heaven 3 of Envy, the bass sounds even louder and: no comments with bass is too loud... What did I do wrong 0.o
well..... Tx for reaction though
oh I see a reaction with bass is too loud in envy heaven!!! yay... And, do you think the main synth is too loud, or sharp? Well.... Just don't know what to do XD
no wait it's even worse...
1st one: sais bass needs to be stronger and lead is too spikey or something
2nd: lead is too loud, drums are waaay too quiet... Bass is too weak
4rd: Bass and kick are too loud...
Always cool to try new things
Sounds good. It got a little repetitive so I only gave ya a 9/10 lol. 5/5 tho. It will be cool to see if you succeed in Drum N Bass like you have in other genres.
good work
I'm gonna have to force myself to be good at it over time if I want to keep a job lol.
good, ur right about the piano :p
You're right about the piano, I didn't take any points off for that though because you mentioned that and have an excuse ;) One thing peeves me off is crappy piano instruments, but I've found that the Soundfont player coupled with a good soundfont (I prefer FLuid R3) has a pretty decent sounding piano. Just a little tidbit if ur thinking of composing at 3 AM again lol. The voice was really cool. Its hard to tell what you're saying, but it gives the song a really eerie feel to it. I always wonder how people can make stuff this good in only a couple of hours.
Good job, but only a 9/10 because it just seemed like it was nothing too special.
Haha, thanks man :)
I found a pretty decent way of making the piano sound a little better just after making this song, all you do is alter the velocity of each note randomly and it gives the piano the feel its actually being played :)
Thanks for the great review man, i really appreciate it!
- Conor
Very nice, I really like the drums
I like it, its really cool. The drums are pretty sweet. Two things though, the piano feels a little out of place. Like the transition is kind of sudden, and it seems as if the piano is almost in a different key.
The second thing is just a pet P of mine, so pay no attention to it. I just am getting tired of all the anti government crap. We all hate the government, we don't need all the music using the same damn cliche too.
Good stuff though, very nice, and I really like ur drum samples.
well, I just was looking for some angry sound samples :D, no meanings with political and that shit but I felt to change the name XD...
Great, and the name fits
Great song. It sounds incredibly professional, and I really like the way you made things mesh together. There was a little oddness with the reverb and how it kind of overpowered things a little at some points, but I don't think that detracts from it too much.
Good job on the name too, its always really hard to find a name that suits a song, and urs does that completely. Now, is there a special someone whos eyes it is named after? :p
Just might be.
POLYGAMY!
Lol, jk, that was just in response to what nintechno said. You can really hear the love in this song though. Great song.
Thank you! :)
(did you also vote? :p)
I liked it
Very good ambient song. I really am a sucker for piano lol. Good job though
have you heard the new version? it's quite better :P
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