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Neat sounds

Pretty unique and interesting sounding. You have some really neat effects going on there. Its not quite my thing, but w.e, its still good, and you deserve a 5 for it.

Good job, keep up the good work

mjattie responds:

thanks :)

Very nice

As a response to your other question. Your skills are far about 99% of the people on newgrounds.

It all sounds pretty damn good. Especially when the entire dance gets going at 2:30 or so. Just pure awesome.

The one thing I can nit-pick about is the sirens, theyre on one tone, and that tone doesn't really fit with the song, so you may want to change the pitch of it. Other than that, pretty damn good...

Just awesome, I'm always impressed by your skills

:)

EPIC

Very good. I honestly have nothing to say about this. It is so awesome. Some parts are sweet, some parts are epic, and some parts are just plain awesome. Great job, hope you have lots of other good music :)

Thanks for the listen, it was worth my time.

Wouldn't say one of ur best

Still better than I can do, but its not one of my favourite of yours.

In your bass, the progression, the second note it goes to, it sounds all weird, as if you are playing two notes right a semitone apart. Also, you messed up the mario melody! lol its supposed to go (this is in the key of C+) E - E - E - C-E - G - G ... Then you messed up on the C- G -E -A-B-Ab-A part. Thats how its supposed to go, you had something different. I know this through memorizing it on the piano lol. Jeese im a freak.

Anyways, its old so I'll let it slide XD lol good job anyways, cant wait to hear whats next. :)

Neat, good composing

Good little diddy. I have no idea how well it will fit into another song. Thats some pretty good composing though, keep working on it. The one thing I am not so sure about is the little semitone drops (forget the technical name... turns? maybe?)

anyways, good job.

Flash-MX responds:

Hey thanks for the review! I will be incorporating this rythym and a little more on the final track, which I... still have yet to figure out how to fit it like you said lol, but it will be done. I was wondering about those changes, I may change those according to the ending, not sure though.

Thanks again! Will be checking out your music as well, peace!

Holy crackling!

Dude, you need to watch the crackling. The bass hits are a good idea and all, its just that they totally ruin the song by making it crackle beyond belief, and it sounds horrible. The actual song sounds great. The piano sounds good. You didn't use more than a few synths though, but thats a reflection of the time you spent on the song.
Just as final note, the bass and two melodies kind of clash at certain points.

Otherwise, good song, keep up the good work.

Glad ur computer survived

Lol, its nice you know ur poor old laptop didn't erupt into a burst of flames trying to render this lol. Sounds pretty damn good though.

I really like the bass at about 0:45 or so. But at that part I think the kick was a tad bit too loud. It almost ruined the softness of the song. Also, using a cutoff drop on the kick sounded a little weird at about 2:20. Also, I'm not sure the reasoning behind the long pause after your voice clip at that point. Seems a little drawn out to me and makes you think that the songs ending. Also, I can't hear any bass around the centre of the song, whether thats what you intended or not I don't know.

Anyways, onto the good. Samples and audio clips are will done. I really like the windy sounding one, and the jet one, it really gives the impression of flying [duh, obviously]. Also, the sample you use along with the kick at about 5:38, sounds a little bit like a tambourine, sounds great. It just adds that little bit of high noise without being too intrusive like a normal high hat would be. I don't even need to mention the instruments. All of them sound good and nothings out of place.

Great job, keep up the good work!

Incredible

its so much less annoying than the actual adds!

Great job, this is hilarious, ad actually sounds good :p

I agree

bass and kick are definitely way too loud in some parts at least. One other thing I noticed around ... 0:55 or so. I'm not a real fan of the pulsing, what is it, static? I realize that its probably just one of your synths, but the point is that it just sounds weird. Other than that, good job, keep up the good work.

mjattie responds:

hmmmm... I haven't heard the kick is too loud...yet... But I don't know what you mean with the pulsing synth, you call static O.o.... I listent to 0:40-0:60 but don't know what you mean... I just don't know what all you guys are saying that the bass is too loud... Can some1 explain why? When I listen to Heaven 3 of Envy, the bass sounds even louder and: no comments with bass is too loud... What did I do wrong 0.o

well..... Tx for reaction though

oh I see a reaction with bass is too loud in envy heaven!!! yay... And, do you think the main synth is too loud, or sharp? Well.... Just don't know what to do XD

no wait it's even worse...
1st one: sais bass needs to be stronger and lead is too spikey or something
2nd: lead is too loud, drums are waaay too quiet... Bass is too weak
4rd: Bass and kick are too loud...

Always cool to try new things

Sounds good. It got a little repetitive so I only gave ya a 9/10 lol. 5/5 tho. It will be cool to see if you succeed in Drum N Bass like you have in other genres.

good work

Mrmilkcarton responds:

I'm gonna have to force myself to be good at it over time if I want to keep a job lol.

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